OTS: The Sci-Fi Channel Has Funny Shows

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OTS: The Sci-Fi Channel Has Funny Shows; ^^
Topic Started: Aug 2 2006, 02:59 AM (442 Views)
synth	Aug 2 2006, 02:59 AM Post #1
MT's ONLY JENNIFER Posts: 816 Group: Members Member #46 Joined: July 26, 2006	completely on the spot, in fact I wrote it in this very new-topic box, hope you enjoy. I know I owe two of you major crits and I'll get to them ASAP. cheers. OTS: The Sci-Fi Channel Has Funny Shows May is dead. “I have no birth?” May is dead. “Then what of my children?” Your children will turn to midnight gusts. “Why?” To get… [The maypole’s cry in streamer circles Twisting like sweaty feet in starched sheets, and They wail rich parsley-breath over the meadow night Brightened by the flaming zephyr coming from the willows.] Because May is dead. “I have no birth?” Because May is dead. “Then what of my children?” Your children will unravel to murky crescents. “Why?” To get… [And my face drifts out of the mirror’s reflection, weeping: “I’m lost in a puddle; dank, broken, and bruised, with Sea salt for skin and stalks as brittle bones.” And I wail rich parsley-green over the meadow night Brightened by the flaming zephyr coming from the willows.] “May is not dead.” “May is not dead.” “May is not dead.” “May is not dead.” “My children are dead.” Why? “Because…” Why? “Because I killed them” Why? “Why?” To get… “To get… forgotten, tossed away from the burning month of May.” [The coil breeze dies to ash]
	-Homosexual Jennifer.


Morgan	Aug 2 2006, 08:50 AM Post #2
Dinkin' flicka. Posts: 1,951 Group: Staff Member #2 Joined: June 28, 2006 Gender: Male Name: Morgan Location: Sarasota, FL Last.fm: rockon1824	First of all, I love your titles. This piece is amazing. I love how it's kind of written like a play. There's absolutely nothing wrong with it. I'm in awe. :o
	Страшный суд скоро, все как свечи гореть будем.


Ninja Kitten	Aug 2 2006, 09:10 AM Post #3
01011011 01100100 01110110 01011101 Posts: 1,529 Group: Members Member #9 Joined: June 28, 2006	Yea, I agree. I would give it a full crit but I love it as is! Great job man
	clicky?


synth	Aug 3 2006, 09:43 PM Post #4
MT's ONLY JENNIFER Posts: 816 Group: Members Member #46 Joined: July 26, 2006	wow, I positivity, thanks guys I really didnt know how this would go over, I'll get to yours soon, thanks again! -synth :boobs:
	-Homosexual Jennifer.


ana	Aug 25 2006, 10:11 PM Post #5
eskizo Posts: 5,817 Group: Staff Member #27 Joined: June 29, 2006 Gender: Female Name: Ana Location: Madrid	dylan... ... ... i hate you hell, this is one of those pieces that makes me wanna quit writing, you're too freaking good... you have an amazingly good style, and obviously there's nothing i can say about this piece except that i damn like it, so i'm just bumping the thread to let you know that i hate you and i'll someday steal your inspiration. j/k, great job.
	I'M SPAINISH! *I DOSENT SPLEL WEL!*


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