First Piece Contest Voting

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Which is the best first piece? (read in first post)
Swear	3 (60%)
Burn Like Fire	2 (40%)
Total Votes: 5

First Piece Contest Voting
Topic Started: Jun 14 2009, 10:50 AM (197 Views)
Morgan	Jun 14 2009, 10:50 AM Post #1
Dinkin' flicka. Posts: 1,873 Group: Staff Member #2 Joined: June 28, 2006 Gender: Male Name: Morgan Location: Sarasota, FL Last.fm: rockon1824	Original submission thread: http://forums.music-talk.org/topic/6605415/1/ Vote! Swear Spoiler: click to toggle Swear By voice… By gesture… By writing… By thought… Stop it! Those words you use Every single day Made to hurt Made to break Made to tear Lives apart! Why can’t you Just stop? When you’re angry… When you’re frustrated… When you’re mellow… When you’re sad… When you’re happy… Just stop! These words you say Every moment, everyday Meant to hurt Meant to break You tear lives apart! Why can’t you stop? Stop! Just stop! Shut up, shut up! Just shut up and stop! At home… At school… At work… At church… Everywhere! Stop saying that! They are the words you use Full of scorn Full of hate Everyday you use them To tear lives to shreds! Made to hurt Made to break Made to put down Made to end By voice… By gesture… By writing… By thought… Burn Like Fire Spoiler: click to toggle Smoke all over my house Burnt and torn down things Ashes lying on the floor I never felt so bad before I've been burnt down I've been run down By the force of fire I never thought that anything Could burn like fire could My heart is burning This isn't funny If can feel it Deep in my soul I feel so cold I've been burnt down I've been run down By the force of fire I never thought that Anything could burn like fire could I feel sad, mad, and bad I can't believe This is happening to me Fire is too strong for me, you see I've been burnt down I've been run down By the force of fire I never thought that Anything could burn like fire could I've been burnt down I've been run down By the force of fire I never thought that Anything could burn like fire could Burn like fire could
	If If you If you could If you could only If you could only stop If you could only stop your If you could only stop your heart If you could only stop your heart beat If you could only stop your heart beat for If you could only stop your heart beat for one heart If you could only stop your heart beat for one heart beat.


Dante	Jun 14 2009, 03:43 PM Post #2
how can it FEEL this WRONG?? Posts: 1,665 Group: Members Member #785 Joined: August 12, 2008 Gender: Male Name: Dante!!! Location: Pennsylvania Last.fm: softshock	Sorry I forgot to enter... I'll still embarrass myself though... This is probably the worst one I could find that was typed up, copypasted from its original form... There are earlier ones but they aren't as funny Spoiler: click to toggle “Not Like You” I won’t say like my life I’m not a liar like you I know it’s not a fair fight Cause I’m not a cheater like you I don’t like you I’m not like you I’M NOT A LIAR LIKE YOU I’M NOT A CHEATER LIKE YOU I’M NOT LIKE YOU BUT I’LL FIGHT YOU AND SOMETIMES YOU’VE GOTTA PLAY BY THE RULES OF THE ONES WHOS BREAKING THE RULES I will say I’ve got a knife I’m not a liar like you I will use it to fight I can be a cheater like you And all your lies you told me Manipulation and deceit shown to everyone around me I’M NOT A LIAR LIKE YOU I’M NOT A CHEATER LIKE YOU I’M DON’T LIKE YOU SO I’LL FIGHT YOU AND SOMETIMES YOU’VE GOTTA FIGHT BY THE RULES OF THE ONES WHOS BREAKING THE RULES I can assure you I will win Your game will turn around I will win I can assure you I will win Your lies will come back to haunt you I will win I’m sure you know that I will win But you’re in denial OF THE FACT THAT I WILL WIN



Morgan	Jun 14 2009, 04:02 PM Post #3
Dinkin' flicka. Posts: 1,873 Group: Staff Member #2 Joined: June 28, 2006 Gender: Male Name: Morgan Location: Sarasota, FL Last.fm: rockon1824	Quote: AND SOMETIMES YOU’VE GOTTA FIGHT BY THE RULES OF THE ONES WHOS BREAKING THE RULES Best lines you ever wrote.
	If If you If you could If you could only If you could only stop If you could only stop your If you could only stop your heart If you could only stop your heart beat If you could only stop your heart beat for If you could only stop your heart beat for one heart If you could only stop your heart beat for one heart beat.


Dante	Jun 14 2009, 04:17 PM Post #4
how can it FEEL this WRONG?? Posts: 1,665 Group: Members Member #785 Joined: August 12, 2008 Gender: Male Name: Dante!!! Location: Pennsylvania Last.fm: softshock	I know right, I was so poetic.



Warbeast	Jun 15 2009, 03:43 PM Post #5
A m'atriia, a ma Helvetia Posts: 214 Group: Members Member #798 Joined: August 23, 2008 Gender: Female Last.fm: Warbeast13	Wait, I'm winning?



Ryth	Jun 15 2009, 04:49 PM Post #6
Every man is first and principally recommended to his own care Posts: 2,717 Group: Members Member #706 Joined: June 9, 2008 Gender: Male Name: Brennan Location: Maryland Last.fm: The_Sound	If you want to call it that... However, with Dante's submission I'm compelled to change my vote.
	Upcoming Reviews: Nigga Please by Ol' Dirty Bastard Conglomerate International by Frodus The Fucking Cunts Treat Us Like Pricks by Flux of Pink Indians Ascension by John Coltrane Rain Dogs by Tom Waits The Dance of the Moon and the Sun by Natural Snow Buildings Escape From Noise by Negativland


Dante	Jun 15 2009, 08:30 PM Post #7
how can it FEEL this WRONG?? Posts: 1,665 Group: Members Member #785 Joined: August 12, 2008 Gender: Male Name: Dante!!! Location: Pennsylvania Last.fm: softshock	You can't vote for me though... I'm late



Ryth	Jun 15 2009, 08:36 PM Post #8
Every man is first and principally recommended to his own care Posts: 2,717 Group: Members Member #706 Joined: June 9, 2008 Gender: Male Name: Brennan Location: Maryland Last.fm: The_Sound	Thats a shame. ):
	Upcoming Reviews: Nigga Please by Ol' Dirty Bastard Conglomerate International by Frodus The Fucking Cunts Treat Us Like Pricks by Flux of Pink Indians Ascension by John Coltrane Rain Dogs by Tom Waits The Dance of the Moon and the Sun by Natural Snow Buildings Escape From Noise by Negativland


Dante	Jun 15 2009, 09:28 PM Post #9
how can it FEEL this WRONG?? Posts: 1,665 Group: Members Member #785 Joined: August 12, 2008 Gender: Male Name: Dante!!! Location: Pennsylvania Last.fm: softshock	I know. I'M NOT A CHEATER LIKE YOU so I can't enter or win.



Warbeast	Jun 15 2009, 10:19 PM Post #10
A m'atriia, a ma Helvetia Posts: 214 Group: Members Member #798 Joined: August 23, 2008 Gender: Female Last.fm: Warbeast13	You know, I would've voted for Dante's too...



Ryth	Jun 16 2009, 12:19 AM Post #11
Every man is first and principally recommended to his own care Posts: 2,717 Group: Members Member #706 Joined: June 9, 2008 Gender: Male Name: Brennan Location: Maryland Last.fm: The_Sound	No matter how hard anyone tries, we cannot out-suck Dante.
	Upcoming Reviews: Nigga Please by Ol' Dirty Bastard Conglomerate International by Frodus The Fucking Cunts Treat Us Like Pricks by Flux of Pink Indians Ascension by John Coltrane Rain Dogs by Tom Waits The Dance of the Moon and the Sun by Natural Snow Buildings Escape From Noise by Negativland


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