Eliminate Yr Map

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Eliminate Yr Map; SotM
Topic Started: May 25 2009, 10:39 PM (159 Views)
Morgan	May 25 2009, 10:39 PM Post #1
Dinkin' flicka. Posts: 1,878 Group: Staff Member #2 Joined: June 28, 2006 Gender: Male Name: Morgan Location: Sarasota, FL Last.fm: rockon1824	I've had the first verse and the chorus of this written for quite a while with music to go with it, so I revised it a bit and finally finished it. I'll show you the way Jointly we have domain Kiss the cage goodbye Holy roses, holy lies Mátate y el diablo te querrá. I'll pull back the veil Reveal the Holy Grail Bleeding orgasmic heart Discharged soul torn apart Mátate y el diablo te querrá. Awake in exposed state This is not the way Safe behind the façade But for the grace of God Mátate y el diablo te querrá. Mira el arroyo en lo que estás. ˇQué lástima! What have we here? It won't get any better, dear. The cycle constantly repeats. Eliminate your own map for keeps.
	If If you If you could If you could only If you could only stop If you could only stop your If you could only stop your heart If you could only stop your heart beat If you could only stop your heart beat for If you could only stop your heart beat for one heart If you could only stop your heart beat for one heart beat.


Warbeast	May 27 2009, 09:13 PM Post #2
A m'atriia, a ma Helvetia Posts: 214 Group: Members Member #798 Joined: August 23, 2008 Gender: Female Last.fm: Warbeast13	It's really good, but I don't understand the Spanish parts.



Ryth	May 27 2009, 09:18 PM Post #3
Every man is first and principally recommended to his own care Posts: 2,717 Group: Members Member #706 Joined: June 9, 2008 Gender: Male Name: Brennan Location: Maryland Last.fm: The_Sound	The title makes me think of Sonic Youth. : D
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Morgan	May 27 2009, 10:18 PM Post #4
Dinkin' flicka. Posts: 1,878 Group: Staff Member #2 Joined: June 28, 2006 Gender: Male Name: Morgan Location: Sarasota, FL Last.fm: rockon1824	Warbeast May 27 2009, 09:13 PM It's really good, but I don't understand the Spanish parts. "Mátate y el diablo te querrá." = "Kill yourself and the devil will love you." "Mira el arroyo en lo que estás." = "Look at the gutter you are in." "ˇQué lástima!" = "What a shame!" Ryth The title makes me think of Sonic Youth. : D Weird, that never even crossed my mind. It's probably more of an subconscious Kerouac illusion, though SY probably got it from the Beats too.
	If If you If you could If you could only If you could only stop If you could only stop your If you could only stop your heart If you could only stop your heart beat If you could only stop your heart beat for If you could only stop your heart beat for one heart If you could only stop your heart beat for one heart beat.


Morgan	Jun 12 2009, 09:50 PM Post #5
Dinkin' flicka. Posts: 1,878 Group: Staff Member #2 Joined: June 28, 2006 Gender: Male Name: Morgan Location: Sarasota, FL Last.fm: rockon1824	Congratulations! You've won this month's Song of the Month competition! This will be pinned until the next winner is crowned next month.
	If If you If you could If you could only If you could only stop If you could only stop your If you could only stop your heart If you could only stop your heart beat If you could only stop your heart beat for If you could only stop your heart beat for one heart If you could only stop your heart beat for one heart beat.


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